fSYNCLIPSE's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Some Boss Battle Music]

The sounds are a bit harsh in my opinion but still a decent track, well done!

Keep up the good work!

FurplePin responds:

Thanks for the feedback! I rlly appreciate it :)

[Lotto ~ Intro]

Nice jingle! The ending's chord progression sounds quite weird but other than that an enjoyable experience!

pikachu000000000 responds:

haha, thanks! the main issue with the chords at the end i think, isn't so much the progression but the fact that the brass doesn't completely follow it, and instead rises chromatically for a bit. luckily this dissonance ended up kinda fitting the original intro though!

[Turn on your porchlight I know you're there.]

Great, though short. Wish it was a complete song

[Another Late Night]

I like this song... but for some reason I can't help but feel like this track has quite a few rough edges that needs to be sorted out.

First is something like chord progression... though I haven't taken music theory so I can't tell you exactly what's wrong with it... I just feel like there's something wrong with the progression.

Second is how muddy the track sounds. Perhaps it's because you used a "lo-fi" piano, but other times there's this strange sound that muddies up the listening experience.

Other than that, good work, keep it up!

[MyFloppy Online! - Chill Out (space lobby)]

what's that cart sound that interrupts the ambience every now and then? I feel that distracts from the mood too much in an otherwise solid track.

[Fear of Repitition]

The piano part is pretty good... though I'm not too sure about the rest. The part that comes after the piano feels like an afterthought

Otherwise, nice track!

[Titanical - Technobopper WIP]

Man I can never muster up enough bravery to post a WIP for some reason. Sounds great!

Very repetitive but I don't know what to expect out of a WIP so... er...

Great track keep up the good work!

Titanical responds:

Thanks!

[Unwavering]

I really like this track... though the string jabs that get introduced in 1:20 does sound out of place. Also the ending is very... out of place as well. Other than those, a solid work!

I've noticed from the other track and here as well... is the peaking part of your style?

[BERSERKER]

Nice track! Though the guitar is a little too in my face (but that's my preference) I liked the rhythm and the sounds. It did get repetitive as the track went on and I think one of the parts in the middle should've been a main chorus. But that's my opinion. Keep up the good work!

JB368-LORD responds:

Thank you, your comments help me know where I should improve

[LADS intro (now outdated)]

You may want to start by snapping the notes in a 4/4 rhythm and creating a drum beat that acts as an anchor rather than the supporting beat. What I mean by that is that instead of however you structured the snare, try instead even 4 beats like so:
|S---|S---|S---|S---|
^notice the even beats

At the moment the jingle sounds disorganized and unpleasant to listen to, though it's a good start!

Ultranimation responds:

Thank you for your feedback, very helpful