The sounds are a bit harsh in my opinion but still a decent track, well done!
Keep up the good work!
The sounds are a bit harsh in my opinion but still a decent track, well done!
Keep up the good work!
Thanks for the feedback! I rlly appreciate it :)
Nice jingle! The ending's chord progression sounds quite weird but other than that an enjoyable experience!
haha, thanks! the main issue with the chords at the end i think, isn't so much the progression but the fact that the brass doesn't completely follow it, and instead rises chromatically for a bit. luckily this dissonance ended up kinda fitting the original intro though!
I like this song... but for some reason I can't help but feel like this track has quite a few rough edges that needs to be sorted out.
First is something like chord progression... though I haven't taken music theory so I can't tell you exactly what's wrong with it... I just feel like there's something wrong with the progression.
Second is how muddy the track sounds. Perhaps it's because you used a "lo-fi" piano, but other times there's this strange sound that muddies up the listening experience.
Other than that, good work, keep it up!
what's that cart sound that interrupts the ambience every now and then? I feel that distracts from the mood too much in an otherwise solid track.
The piano part is pretty good... though I'm not too sure about the rest. The part that comes after the piano feels like an afterthought
Otherwise, nice track!
Man I can never muster up enough bravery to post a WIP for some reason. Sounds great!
Very repetitive but I don't know what to expect out of a WIP so... er...
Great track keep up the good work!
Thanks!
I really like this track... though the string jabs that get introduced in 1:20 does sound out of place. Also the ending is very... out of place as well. Other than those, a solid work!
I've noticed from the other track and here as well... is the peaking part of your style?
Nice track! Though the guitar is a little too in my face (but that's my preference) I liked the rhythm and the sounds. It did get repetitive as the track went on and I think one of the parts in the middle should've been a main chorus. But that's my opinion. Keep up the good work!
Thank you, your comments help me know where I should improve
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