fSYNCLIPSE's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Music Box]

Pretty nice... though the music box doesn't go brr enough!

trewopty responds:

don't worry, i make sure music box go brr!

[M4gnusRx - I Made This Song]

Welcome to the world of making music or whatever that was called! If I were to guess which DAW you used, I'd say you used LMMS. I recognize that tripleoscillator from anywhere.

Great start! The main problem you should focus on is controlling the volume better. Pro tip: change either your master volume or the FX slider volume to 50~70%.

Really, other than that what you have is a decent melody that can probably get spiced up with the right instruments preset and samples. Might I interest you in some of the presets I made?

MagnusRx responds:

Sure! More presets will be able to help me make my music better.

[POV: You are Brazil]

Pretty good!
Though I do have to say you cheated and what we have here is 120bpm rather than 240.

I dare you to do a proper 200BPM track

(Edit: I meant the song may be made in 240BPM, the pacing and beat is definitely 120)

xVoided responds:

It is 240 bpm, just that it sounds 120 because of how i made stuff, so yeah
will do, hell's neon was a 200+ bpm track but i will make more in the future!

[ChuckChuckGoof - Sophie's Song]

It is experimental. Who knew Sophie could be easily turned into a music track. Though I have to say the part with the barking didn't work that well.

Solid work, good job!

ChuckChuckGoof responds:

Yo, thanks bro.

[Doin' The Work']

This track could pass as an ambient or background track, if the weird chip noise wasn't there. The weird chip detuned noise just doesn't work with the other instruments and thus cause a distraction from the listening experience. Other than that, nice work.

Also what's the last apostrophe for in the track title? Worke? Worky? Please, I need to know!

DetunedTheLazyDude responds:

It should be pronounced Doine the Worke, ty for the track review-

[Speeder Ten]

There's potential... but at the moment this track is missing quite a few essential keys.
First is a comprehensive beat. Try following a 4/4 beat.
Next is other instruments that can accompany the current one. I mean it's optional but it's highly recommended.

To get started try creating a simple drum beat of just bass and snare, then making a synth pattern over it.

MultiSkittle responds:

thx for the advice

[iON]

The track definitely sounds like it's in space... however there are a few problems I can think of. The part 1:28~1:52 just sound a bit awkward. I can't exactly tell you how it's awkward, but it's definitely a little weird.

I also keep expecting there to be a transition to a main chorus but that never happens. Though it's okay to not have a main chorus I guess.

Otherwise, a decent track!

Tsunami990 responds:

Thanks. i'll try my best on next track

[Zap!]

Neat. Short, but neat!

Though the way there's a little too much end silence causing the loop to the beginning to be a little delayed will haunt me forever.

Deeski-mations responds:

That’s understandable! I’ll make sure to work on that.

[Unbreakable]

The nokia tones hurts my sensitive ears. Every time it goes to a higher note it makes me wince. A decent first attempt but I do have to take marks off for not utilizing the 522BPM, rather it sounds like some ordinary 90~150BPM range. Try making something in the normal BPM ranges first. Anything beyond 250BPM becomes hard to manage and make a track sound like music.

Ditch the nokia tones though and make sure to indicate you've used 3rd party samples if those voice things are from FnF, otherwise disregard the latter suggestion.

Noxzii responds:

yeah i selected the "contains 3rd party samples" already. i'll try to make another normal beat soon. thanks for the advice

[Mindtrip]

Pretty nice!

Might I interest you in a free software called LMMS (it's my goto DAW)? I'm not sure if it's on MacOS, but it's on Linux and Windows. If you only have an iPad I don't really know any good software other than garageband for iOS

brookee responds:

I'll be sure to try it! I have a PC and I've been wanting to make music on it, but I didn't know where to start. Thanks for the advice!