fSYNCLIPSE's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Music Box]

Pretty nice... though the music box doesn't go brr enough!

trewopty responds:

don't worry, i make sure music box go brr!

[M4gnusRx - I Made This Song]

Welcome to the world of making music or whatever that was called! If I were to guess which DAW you used, I'd say you used LMMS. I recognize that tripleoscillator from anywhere.

Great start! The main problem you should focus on is controlling the volume better. Pro tip: change either your master volume or the FX slider volume to 50~70%.

Really, other than that what you have is a decent melody that can probably get spiced up with the right instruments preset and samples. Might I interest you in some of the presets I made?

MagnusRx responds:

Sure! More presets will be able to help me make my music better.

[POV: You are Brazil]

Pretty good!
Though I do have to say you cheated and what we have here is 120bpm rather than 240.

I dare you to do a proper 200BPM track

(Edit: I meant the song may be made in 240BPM, the pacing and beat is definitely 120)

xVoided responds:

It is 240 bpm, just that it sounds 120 because of how i made stuff, so yeah
will do, hell's neon was a 200+ bpm track but i will make more in the future!

[GalungBoss]

It's uninteresting. I'm unsure how you can fix this but to me it just didn't work well.

[Radar Detection]

Very repetitive. Perhaps change up the synth and pad patterns every now and then and insert a main chorus or a drop to keep interest.

Sounds nice though.

[Explosion Part 2]

Overall decent track, however you could've ended the track between the 2~3 minute mark. The song drags on for a bit and becomes boring. The ending lasts too long as well.

Though the rest is decent, keep it up!

[ChuckChuckGoof - Sophie's Song]

It is experimental. Who knew Sophie could be easily turned into a music track. Though I have to say the part with the barking didn't work that well.

Solid work, good job!

ChuckChuckGoof responds:

Yo, thanks bro.

[Doin' The Work']

This track could pass as an ambient or background track, if the weird chip noise wasn't there. The weird chip detuned noise just doesn't work with the other instruments and thus cause a distraction from the listening experience. Other than that, nice work.

Also what's the last apostrophe for in the track title? Worke? Worky? Please, I need to know!

DetunedTheLazyDude responds:

It should be pronounced Doine the Worke, ty for the track review-

[Speeder Ten]

There's potential... but at the moment this track is missing quite a few essential keys.
First is a comprehensive beat. Try following a 4/4 beat.
Next is other instruments that can accompany the current one. I mean it's optional but it's highly recommended.

To get started try creating a simple drum beat of just bass and snare, then making a synth pattern over it.

MultiSkittle responds:

thx for the advice

[iON]

The track definitely sounds like it's in space... however there are a few problems I can think of. The part 1:28~1:52 just sound a bit awkward. I can't exactly tell you how it's awkward, but it's definitely a little weird.

I also keep expecting there to be a transition to a main chorus but that never happens. Though it's okay to not have a main chorus I guess.

Otherwise, a decent track!

Tsunami990 responds:

Thanks. i'll try my best on next track