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[KW – Adzumi]

Though it was pretty obvious you were using loops, I can't exactly fault you on that since the song did sound pretty good. I do think it needs some attention to detail(like making sure there's no gap between the loops) and finalisations such as fadeouts.

Otherwise a solid track, good work!

KomedianWolf responds:

Thank you very much for your criticism :3
Next time, consider these points

[Some Boss Battle Music]

The sounds are a bit harsh in my opinion but still a decent track, well done!

Keep up the good work!

FurplePin responds:

Thanks for the feedback! I rlly appreciate it :)

[Lotto ~ Intro]

Nice jingle! The ending's chord progression sounds quite weird but other than that an enjoyable experience!

pikachu000000000 responds:

haha, thanks! the main issue with the chords at the end i think, isn't so much the progression but the fact that the brass doesn't completely follow it, and instead rises chromatically for a bit. luckily this dissonance ended up kinda fitting the original intro though!

[Titanical - Technobopper WIP]

Man I can never muster up enough bravery to post a WIP for some reason. Sounds great!

Very repetitive but I don't know what to expect out of a WIP so... er...

Great track keep up the good work!

Titanical responds:

Thanks!

[BERSERKER]

Nice track! Though the guitar is a little too in my face (but that's my preference) I liked the rhythm and the sounds. It did get repetitive as the track went on and I think one of the parts in the middle should've been a main chorus. But that's my opinion. Keep up the good work!

JB368-LORD responds:

Thank you, your comments help me know where I should improve

[Soup's Off!]

Great song!

I don't know whether the whole point was to use one drum pattern, but I would've liked if you changed the pattern at appropriate moments to make the song sound less "long".

The only problem I noticed is minor:
The synth that gets introduced in 01:45 doesn't fit that well in the section 01:45~01:51. Try reusing the up and down pattern that's used right after the section.

Keep up the good work!

Rost-Kilroy responds:

Hey, thanks for the constructive criticism!

Regarding of the drum pattern, yeah, I should’ve changed a bit on specific moments, but I’m at loss at making my own drum patterns, let alone edit a current loop from the packs (I’ve only used DL_Classic Break (Packs -> Legacy -> Loops)). The drum parts on FL Studio’s plugins is very new to me since I have so many ways to do it, from setting up separately or all in one in a single track.

As for the synth at 01:45-01:51, my attempt was to put a different melody that goes along with the main one in order that it wasn’t so monotonous. Come to think of it, the ups and downs would’ve been perfect.
Thank you again, for having a time to point all of this things, it helps a lot to improve.

[Daisy Sunday]

I haven't seen the artwork yet, but I like what's going on here!

debbyclowner responds:

Added a link to the original artwork to the description! I spelled the username wrong in my description haha

[Skymine123 - UNICORN]

Alright, this is koolz and all, but there is a few problems with the track. The snares are way too loud, there isn't enough BASS in the bass drum, the water drop sound is underwhelming, and the "pew" effect thing doesn't go long enough.

For the snares, try reducing some of them to match the volumes of other tracks

For the bass thing, try adding a sub bass instrument and accompany the bass drum

For the water drop soundfx, try swapping it out with something that sounds more epic

For the pew sound, change the sample if you can't extend it and fade out.

As a suggestion, I recommend changing the note lengths of the main instrument to make it sound more dynamic and interesting.

Skymine123official responds:

I dont know

[City Lights]

Really good and peaceful! I like it!

mrElecktron responds:

Thank you! I am hoping to make a few more songs with this kind of vibe.