fSYNCLIPSE's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[City Lights]

Really good and peaceful! I like it!

mrElecktron responds:

Thank you! I am hoping to make a few more songs with this kind of vibe.

[Electric Sound Garden]

Like the music! Although the piano-like synth at 2:00 sounds out of sync towards the last bar. Also you could use some more amplification for the whole song. I recommend using a sound editing software such as Audacity to Normalize the song.

mrElecktron responds:

Hey thank you for your feedback, I think definitely in a couple of my songs there are parts where things could be syncd up, I try to mitigate that with manually moving the midi notes and stuff where I can. I actually use FL studio and Youlean Loudness Meter plugin after I am done with the mix to try to hit around -14 so when I post on Youtube and stuff the platforms don't have to amplify or turn down the songs too much but definitely noted I think I still need to work on getting a good mix and incorporating more automation in volume control. Thanks again!

[Doomsday]

Really nice track! All it is missing is a main lead or the accompanying melody (at least that's what I feel).

SpongeeMusic responds:

Thank you for the feedback! i will definitly keep this in mind while working on future tracks.

[Total]

This song is cool, but could use a bit more work. The silent bit is way too silent. Perhaps adding a riser that starts from the middle of the silence to connect with the second part would make the song much more interesting. As well as that, perhaps making the second part a little more "intense" would likely help as well.

FrenchHornGuy responds:

Thanks! Might make an update with that stuff. Good suggestions!

[Around (First Move)]

I don't know whether it was intentional or not, but the listening experience is poor due to too much clipping. Way too loud m8.

emseeemotion responds:

I wanted really blown out drums for it. I think it fits for the panic attack-esque vibe of the track. Clipping to me is an evocative way to immerse the listener into that while still maintaining elements of pop structure and form. Totally cool that it wasn't for you though, thanks for listening!

[WANDERANG]

I feel like I know what you're trying to do... but it's not really done right, or at least it feels like that.

Alright, big problems: The first few snares in the intro are too loud. Also, the snare at 00:41 are so loud they are basically jumpscares. Actually the snare in several places are louder than desired, especially when there's a part with four snares in a row. It sounds a lot like you accidentally have duplicate snares on top of each other.

The piano sounds out of place. Try replacing it with a synth. The steel drums part is just weird... I think you were trying to have a calming moment before the last part, but it's either too short or the instrument is wrong or both.

Other than that, nice song!

DooarDz responds:

oh my god, well xD, the truth when i do this kind of things, I don’t think much, this is a product of a few free hours, but, I thank you, this is a version with a random beat, the only thing I liked was the piano part (sorry for my bad english)... and thank you for the comment, I will try to improve

[World Bowser - SM3DW]

Really catchy tune! Although I have to say the synth that gets introduced at 0:50 just sounds a tiny bit out of place, perhaps you're using the wrong sound? Still really good though, would love to hear more from ya!

Waddoop responds:

It's actually Bowser's Theme from Mario 64! Same instruments and all. Initially my ear told me it fit with simple transposing but maybe I should've changed some notes to fit to the key better?

Thanks a ton for taking the time to listen and review, even! Honestly didn't think unapproved artists got much attention here, glad to be proven wrong.